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As the devil broke through my front door
I heard her shout my name
My knees buckled and I hit the floor
Knowing it would never be the same

Oh and as I drew out my knife
Felt it wouldn't do me right
Thrust it down into my heart oh whoa no
Oh what a sight

And she screamed for my blood
And she screamed for her loss
While I died for mine

As I slipped away into the night
I thought I had done just fine

Found death's sweet caress
Rest my head against her breast
For a time
Oh she was mine oh yes

But I woke the next mornin
The devil at my side
Brushing her lips against my neck
Running her bloodied hand along my thigh

Pushed her aside
As I bolted from the bed
Wanted to know that I was dreamin
But then the devil filled my head

So I kissed her
For I missed her
And it all felt like it was the same
But as I rested beside her

I heard death whisperin' my name
©2005-2009 ~scarmaker
:iconscarmaker:

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. First thing I've written in awhile .

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:icontooweaktosmile:
That's....very cool. I like how the devil is a girl. She seems sexy.

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I'm all dressed up and ready to play.
:iconbeepslalu:
thats pretty good, its really expresive, which makes it enjoyable! :clap: well written

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You wait little girl on an empty stage for fate to turn the light on...
:icondeletelime:
i readeded this already, told ya i liked it. still do. :)

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there are so many of me...

[~BlancoCuervo -- pictures of me.]
[~cacographyX -- sketches/painting/photomanips.]
:iconiustitiaomnibus:
Excellent piece, I loved the flow. I also liked how you used a woman to represent the devil, its different.

I like these lines:


So I kissed her
For I missed her
And it all felt like it was the same
But as I rested beside her

I heard death whisperin' my name

Good Stuff :)
:iconphilosmatika:
You are a very gifted individual

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"Life's not a bitch. Life's a beautiful woman. You only call her a bitch 'cause she won't let you get that pussy"--Aesop Rock
:iconscarmaker:
Thank you, although I am not inclined to believe so myself
:iconphilosmatika:
What a pity...

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"Life's not a bitch. Life's a beautiful woman. You only call her a bitch 'cause she won't let you get that pussy"--Aesop Rock

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